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Pattern Recognition

Sep 27, 2011 21:17

Title: Pattern Recognition
Author: je
Story: Cryptomancy
Challenge(s): Tropical Punch #22: On the same page; Vanilla Bean #20: Pattern
Word Count: 944
Rating: G
Summary: Chaill attempts to prove his usefulness to Lady Bloodrose by reading her mail. It makes sense.
Notes: I apologize for the abrupt ending on this. I'm splitting into two parts because it's ( Read more... )

[challenge] vanilla bean, [challenge] tropical punch

Comments 7

kay_brooke September 28 2011, 19:39:42 UTC

Hm, interesting. I wonder how much of this was a test?

toxic_fairie September 29 2011, 18:39:16 UTC

Eek, I don't want to show too much of my hand...hahaha...thank you so much for reading though <3

ichthusfish September 29 2011, 00:36:22 UTC

Uh-oh! Well, this confirms my thoughts on Lady Bloodrose being a psycho, but she's a psycho with an agenda by the looks of things, which is an even worse scenario. Chaill will really have to watch his back (and all his associated body parts). Very nicely written. You have a poetic way with words :)

toxic_fairie September 29 2011, 18:37:29 UTC

Thank you so much for saying ^^ that really means a lot!

And yes, she is most definitely batty...and a bit of a collector. :O

draloreshimare October 5 2011, 04:55:25 UTC

Ah! I like this bit. And you end it so well. (Oh, I'm so behind!...On so much...)

toxic_fairie October 6 2011, 05:49:07 UTC

Awwww well thank you ^^ I am not necessarily sure you aren't being sarcastic when you say it's ended well...LOL but thanks <3

draloreshimare October 6 2011, 06:02:00 UTC

I am a sucker for last sentences/paragraphs. Trust meee...