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Cranberry and Cola w/ Gummy Bunnies, Blueberries, Pineapple and Whipped Cream

Sep 13, 2011 23:18

Author: Nikki
Challenge: Cranberry #22 (Swords -strife, misfortune), Cola #19 (the fabric of our lives)
Extras/Toppings: Gummy Bunnies (origfic31 Sept. card 1 - B4: crying), Blueberries (Something there is more immortal even than the stars, Many the burials, many the days and nights, passing away), Pineapple (Between people searching each other and ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] nikki, [topping] whipped cream, [topping] gummy bunnies, [challenge] cola, [challenge] cranberry, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [extra] fresh fruit : blueberries

Comments 2

kay_brooke September 14 2011, 17:32:33 UTC

Poor Chloe. The emotion is so strong in this piece, with Chloe really realizing the depths of Angie's pain. I do hope that listening, no matter how uncomfortable it made her, helps Chloe understand better what Angie was like.

bookblather September 16 2011, 04:10:17 UTC

Oh, man, that ending. I mean, in the middle, it was kind of cute, just Angie and Rich fucking around on CD, but then the end is just... man. Heartbreaking.

(You really need an AU where Angie and Chloe meet.)

Excellent job.