Passionfruit 29

Sep 11, 2011 11:39

Author: sunsetsinthewes
Challenge: Passionfruit 29. My life closed twice before its close - Emily Dickinson
Extras: Pocky
Word Count: 80
Rating: G
Story: _____; the title of this story is Gone Before Morning.
Summary: When it comes to his safety, she takes no chances.
Notes: I promise that these will start to get longer and contain more substance. Very soon, in ( Read more... )

[extra] pocky, [inactive-author] sunsetsinthewes, [challenge] passionfruit

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subluxate September 11 2011, 21:16:47 UTC
WHY ARE YOU BEING HEARTBREAKING

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sunsetsinthewes September 13 2011, 20:08:46 UTC
BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT I DO BEST.

And because, like, this entire canon is BREAK YOUR HEART ALWAYS.

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bookblather September 12 2011, 01:38:52 UTC
Oh, my heart. Are these the same two characters as before? That's... heartbreaking, even more so than the first few.

I'm not sure I want to know about the backstory to this...

Fabulous job.

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sunsetsinthewes September 13 2011, 20:09:34 UTC
Yep, they're the same two characters in every piece-- they just don't have names.

The backstory is definitely not all good. :/

Gah, thank you. You're making me giddy.

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sarcasticsra September 12 2011, 02:15:17 UTC
Gah, so gorgeously written and so seriously heartbreaking. Wonderful job.

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sunsetsinthewes September 13 2011, 20:10:44 UTC
Yaaaaay. I mean, not yay that I'm breaking everyone's heart, but yaaaaaay, I'm breaking everyone's heart. \o/

Thank you!

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walkwithheroes September 12 2011, 02:46:34 UTC
Beautiful and heartbreaking. You did a wonderful job; the writing here is simple and yet so gorgeous. You killed me, but in the very best way.

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sunsetsinthewes September 13 2011, 20:10:07 UTC
Thank you, so much! I'm glad it worked despite the simplistic style.

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hi_falootin September 14 2011, 03:08:27 UTC
oof! this creates quite an impact in very few words!

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