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darkfaerieclaw in runaway_tales

It's Coming Closer + Off Balance

Sep 09, 2011 23:58

Title: It's Coming Closer
Story Continuity: The Lethean Glamour
Flavors: Blueberry Yogurt 20: observation, Papaya 29: I wouldn't miss it, Cheesecake 2: Bring on the lovers, liars and clowns!
Extra/Topping: Pocky, Hot Fudge, Butterscotch (Helene is 19)
Rating: PG
Summary: Helene can see forever.
Note: Or, experimenting with Helene's visions. Very last of ( Read more... )

[challenge] cheesecake, [inactive-author] dark faerie claw, [challenge] papaya, [topping] butterscotch, [topping] hot fudge, [challenge] mango, [topping] whipped cream, [challenge] blueberry yogurt, [extra] pocky

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darkfaerieclaw September 10 2011, 07:33:28 UTC

Oh, that first one is so creepy you can feel the madness coming from the screen.

Success! Glad you think so; I wasn't sure if the juxtaposed visions were jarring or not. Well, jarring in the wrong ways.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked both of them.

bookblather September 12 2011, 01:30:01 UTC

Helene is fucking scary. I mean, she sees lakes of blood and gets on her bathing suit. SCARY.

And so is the second one, in a very different way. This time it's Cygnelius's fear infecting the story, that and his uncertainty as to Lysandro's and especially Valentio's survival. Excellent job there, especially in his anger at the maid.

darkfaerieclaw September 12 2011, 04:35:26 UTC

Helene is fucking scary. I mean, she sees lakes of blood and gets on her bathing suit. SCARY.

Hee! That...should not be so funny, but thank you, I'm glad she's appropriately scary.

Likewise glad Cygnelius's story conveyed the proper emotions. I had a time with the anger at the maid.

Thank you so much! I'm glad both stories were to your liking. <3