Passionfruit 1

[sunsetsinthewes]

Author: sunsetsinthewes
Challenge: Passionfruit 1. One paints the beginning of a certain end. - Maya Angelou
Word Count: 410
Rating: G
Story: _____; the title of this story is Heading East.
Summary: When he calls, she knows just how to answer.
Notes: So, it seems that I have a new canon. Seriously. I've been working on this canon off and on since 2005< so I'm

Comments

[darkfaerieclaw]

I like this, and especially the little details; the buzzing of the sign, how the two of them sing, the flag that has twelve strips in the bathroom. It's intimate, but (and correct me if I'm misreading this somehow) there's a touch of something darker under it. I'm curious.

[sunsetsinthewes]

I love including the little details more than anything. And, yep, you're definitely reading this right.

[gandolforf]

Intriguing, I like.

that only has twelve strips

Stripes?

[sunsetsinthewes]

Lol, good catch, thanks.

[subluxate]

God, I love them. I love the offness to the relationship, the not-quite-rightness, and the little hints and tones to this.

[sunsetsinthewes]

Yeah, I'm ridiculously excited to be writing this.

[kitrona]

I'm enjoying these. Very intriguing. (I'm reading them backwards, since that's how they show up on my FL.)

[sunsetsinthewes]

Yay, glad that you're enjoying them!

[bookblather]

There's definitely something hinky going on here-- I hope both of these people get out okay, but somehow I don't think that it will. Excellent job, especially on the little details like the shirt and the decorative flag.

[sunsetsinthewes]

Yeah, this... this ultimately doesn't end well. And a lot goes wrong before then, too. :/ What can I say, I'm cruel. I like to torture characters, mwahahaha.

Thank you!