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darkfaerieclaw in runaway_tales

Warm

Aug 29, 2011 01:14

Title: Warm
Story Continuity: Pandora's Earth
Flavors: Blueberry Yogurt 3: a secret, Papaya 12: you don't know what you're missing, Gingerbread 8: golden egg
Extra: Pocky
Rating: G
Word count: 100
Summary: Natalie likes a bit of Chinese and Gareth does not.

( This trust is strange and new to him, too. )

[challenge] gingerbread, [inactive-author] dark faerie claw, [challenge] papaya, [extra] pocky, [challenge] blueberry yogurt

Comments 6

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darkfaerieclaw August 29 2011, 06:31:03 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like it.

And hey, welcome back! Nice to hear from you again. :)

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darkfaerieclaw August 29 2011, 17:36:37 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm delighted you think so highly of this pocky. <3

smoothiegarten August 30 2011, 04:07:32 UTC

You did an excellent job just capturing the moment in this one. It feels like you've really given us a glimpse of Gareth's existence, too, with the feeling of finding something satisfying and lovely in an otherwise uneasy life.

darkfaerieclaw August 30 2011, 04:09:00 UTC

Thank you very much! I'm glad you think so. :)

bookblather August 31 2011, 04:57:50 UTC

Awwwwww. I like the trust evident here, both in the Chinese and in the eventual knowledge that Gareth will give to Natalie. And also this line: The day is wrapped in sunlight That line is magic.

darkfaerieclaw August 31 2011, 05:06:12 UTC

Thank you! I'm really glad everything seems to work well. <3