Cinnamon Swirl 24, Black raspberry 25, Dark Chocolate 11: Shatter Point

[memirra]

Title: Shatter Point
Author: Memirra
Challenge: Cinnamon Swirl #24 (face to face), Black Raspberry #25 (the best things in life are free), Dark Chocolate #11 (compulsion)
Toppings/Extras: Hot fudge, Rainbow Sprinkles, Fresh Peaches
Story: [No name as of yet]
Word Count: 749
Rating: PG-13
Summary: You cannot fix what does not belong to you.
Notes: Another

Comments

[walkwithheroes]

Whoa. And, I mean that it the very best ways. This piece is so layered; I feel the tenseness, the emotion - it's brilliant. Subtext, dialogue, details - they are all so freakin' perfect. I love this!

[memirra]

Aw, thanks so much! I'm happy that you enjoyed this! :)

[bookblather]

Wow. He may be manipulative and kind of evil but he's fascinating that way. Great job here.

[memirra]

Thank you! :D Yeah, he is, for some reason dark characters are just so...addicting.

[kay_brooke]

Great, fascinating characters. I like the rhythm of the piece; it really underscores the tension between the characters. Great job!

[memirra]

Thank you! I really wanted the tension to show through, I'm glad it turned out okay. :)

[kaitygirl88]

Resmon fascinates me! To me, his introspection in this piece felt...removed, like he's always taking one step back to watch his life instead of living it. He's one screwed up little monkey, but I so want to see more of him! :D

[memirra]

It makes me happy that Resmon fascinates you! :) I really enjoy writing for him, even if he is a little weird in the head. xD Maybe that's where all his charm comes from, haha. I',=m definitely writing more for him. Thank you very much! :D <3