Haunted By Blue

[darkfaerieclaw]

Title: Haunted By Blue
Flavors: Blueberry Yogurt 1: the blues, Cheesecake 9: Manhattan babies don't sleep tight until the dawn, Papaya 20: you remind me of someone
Extra: Malt (birthday present: Ninablues: the girl in the corner)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1083
Summary: There will be no fresh air for his lungs tonight.
Notes: I tweaked Jem's age on

Comments

[darkfaerieclaw]

Like Neil Gaiman and Susannah Clarke? I'm only sorry I don't have an icon for head-exploding. Because you have just blown my mind and made my night, woman.

Thank you! I'm thrilled you liked it.

[memirra]

Wow, this totally blew me away. Your writing style is very descriptive and emotion-evoking; I loved the way you described Jemesk, and his reactions to the man. Lovely dialogue and good wording and...and...everything. D: Wonderful job!

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you! That's wonderful to hear. I'm happy you enjoyed it!

[bookblather]

I totally should have known this was you. The tags of humor in a rather dark piece, the awesome dialogue, the perfect little touches of description, it's so you. Well done as usual, and I can't wait for more.

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you! I'm glad you still like it. I'm certainly looking forward to writing more.

[smoothiegarten]

This was one of my favorites from the icebreaker! It's really intriguing and the description is fantastic.

[darkfaerieclaw]

Thank you! That's fantastic to hear.