Comments | runaway_tales: Last Heavenly Hash + Green Cheese #15, fresh peaches, cherry

kaitygirl88 in runaway_tales

Last Heavenly Hash + Green Cheese #15, fresh peaches, cherry

Aug 15, 2011 16:23

Story: Nothing But the Truth
Title: It's Just...
Prompts: Green Cheese #15: orbit, Heavenly Hash #27: weight of the world
Word Count: 943
Rating: PG13
Summary: My entry for the Anonymous Icebreaker, thanks to everyone that commented there! Emma Clark has relationship problems and needs a shoulder to pout on. Much to the surprise of the people that know ( Read more... )

[challenge] green cheese, [inactive-author] kaitygirl, [challenge] heavenly hash, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [topping] cherry

Comments 2

bookblather August 16 2011, 04:01:50 UTC

Oh, my. I do like the way you demonstrated what it is the Extractors do, exactly-- it sure justifies the downtime they get-- but the whiplash from Fletcher with his sister to Ransom probably killing two people is really kind of frightening. Well done.

luna_moonsilver August 18 2011, 15:27:47 UTC

Wow - I loved the first piece when I read it originally (and I still do ;D) but I think I love the second even more! Ransom is so interesting; I think the way you've portrayed him as someone who just gets the job done is fantastic! I really really can't wait for more of this :D.