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Cola 12: What I Deserve

Aug 07, 2011 00:14

Title: What I Deserve
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Cola 12 (don’t hate me because I’m beautiful), My Treat (Yvonne doesn't understand why people turn away from her), root beer float, pocky chain, caramel (the frame story and last script), butterscotch (most of the rest), cherry (first person and script bits), hot fudge ( ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [topping] caramel, [topping] butterscotch, [topping] hot fudge, [inactive-author] bookblather, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [extra] root beer float, [extra] pocky chain, [challenge] cola, [topping] cherry

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bookblather August 9 2011, 03:40:25 UTC

I don't know yet. I think she might have agreed to go to a group session for some ulterior motive and then got pulled back for private sessions? Not sure. I'll figure it out. And yeah. Wow.

Thanks!

rustydragonfly August 7 2011, 10:11:17 UTC

Owww. I have to admit the "people who don't want therapy really need it" thing makes me a bit uncomfortable, but in Yvonne's case it sounds like it's true. I'm also curious what it took to get her there. She's terrifying in her complete inability to care about anyone.

bookblather August 9 2011, 03:40:52 UTC

She... is pretty special. And she did agree to this, although I don't know why, or who persuaded her into it. So. She's just a creepy, creepy person.

Thank you!

hungryocean August 7 2011, 21:30:32 UTC

Haha, excellent portrayal of a jerk in therapy. And being jealous of the baby, she's definitely giving off a little Jenna from 30 Rock vibe. :D

bookblather August 9 2011, 03:41:15 UTC

Yvonne is unfortunately a little more than jerky. More like sociopathic. Although not quite there yet.

Thank you.

niee87 August 8 2011, 00:38:47 UTC

You did a really good job using all three of the Casino Night prompts! I wouldn't have wanted them :) Yvonne will never fail to give me the shivers, despite her 'love' of Olivia. The script parts play off the first person parts really well too. Of course, the thought of Yvonne in therapy blows my mind :P

bookblather August 9 2011, 03:42:04 UTC

Ha, I didn't want them either. BUT I MADE IT WORK. Thank you!

Yeah, it kinda blows my mind too. IDK, I know it happens somehow.

sarcasticsra August 8 2011, 04:42:39 UTC

Oh, Yvonne, you are just a ball of issues, aren't you? Fascinating issues, granted, but issues all the same. I really liked this look at her, and I like how it was intercut with the script-format scenes--very effective. Am I just reading into it, or is that kind of a nod to how Yvonne manipulates people and 'stages' situations, as if they're all just players in her game? Either way, I loved it. Well done!

bookblather August 9 2011, 03:43:36 UTC

Yvonne is the kind of collection of issues that you want to examine from very, very far away.

And you are reading the staging into it, but I kind of love that interpretation so I'll be pretending that I meant to do that, now. :D

Thanks!