A Moment's Delusion

Jul 27, 2011 22:18

Title: A Moment's Delusion
Author: Memirra
Challenge: Green Tea # 25 (Countdown), Cinnamon Swirl # 11 (Going in Circles)
Toppings/Extras: None
Story: Cracked Mirrors
Word Count: 824
Rating: G
Summary: There is a fine line between dreams and delusion. Sometimes that line blurs to the point of nonexistence.
Notes: First post, hope this is okay!
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[challenge] cinnamon swirl, [challenge] green tea

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memirra July 29 2011, 21:08:05 UTC
Thank you! Haha, I feel like such a total newbie. XD

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lady_macbeth_19 July 28 2011, 20:45:34 UTC
Oh, wow. What an emotive first post! I really like the way you use time in this piece! Its really nice circle.
Welcome and I'm really excited to read more of your work!
XxLil

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memirra July 29 2011, 22:50:17 UTC
Thank you very much! :) I'm really happy to have such a warm welcoming here. Thank you again. ^^

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gandolforf July 28 2011, 23:44:05 UTC
Hi, welcome to the community! I'm setting up your author tag now. Along with putting every entry (other than your header) under a cut, it would also help if you didn't make the font bigger, as this can also mess with other members' friends pages. Thanks!

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memirra July 29 2011, 22:52:44 UTC
Thank you for setting up my author tag and informing me, I appreciate it. :)

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shayna611 July 29 2011, 00:56:30 UTC
Welcome to RaTs - this is an interesting beginning you've got. :)

for using cuts take a look at http://www.livejournal.com/support/faqbrowse.bml?faqid=75 and let one of us know if you have questions

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memirra July 30 2011, 05:29:04 UTC
Thank you very much! :)

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kaitygirl88 July 29 2011, 02:13:51 UTC
Oh, man! What an interesting beginning! This felt like something out of a crazy movie, the descriptions were very well done and the sense of unreality was gripping. All I can say is I'm very glad I don't have lawn-eating dreams! XD

Welcome to RaTs and I do hope to see more of this!

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memirra July 30 2011, 06:36:10 UTC
Thank you very much for the wonderful comment. ^^ Haha, I'm really glad I don't have dreams like that either, but I guess it's better to leave such things to characters anyhow...XD

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