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ninablues in runaway_tales

blueberry cheesecake and strawberry shortcake with sprinkles

Jul 09, 2011 18:57

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Much Less Nervous
Rating: PG (language)
Challenge: Blueberry Cheesecake #18: meeting of minds, Strawberry Shortcake #13: be our guest
Toppings/Extras: sprinkles
Wordcount: 1,583
Summary: Taisy Daniels meets Victor Blackledge through other people, mostly.
Notes: Wasn’t as back as I thought I was, I ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] blueberry cheesecake, [challenge] strawberry shortcake

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ninablues July 10 2011, 19:25:44 UTC

Yeah, I've not done much with Taisy so I thought I'd make her the focus of something for once. And I hardly ever write about her relationship with Victor-- all of the black ops team, actually, have fairly interesting nuances between them that I never ever write about. XD

Thanks so much! Good to be back!

ichthusfish July 10 2011, 04:12:24 UTC

Yay! Welcome back! =D

I love how much we see of Vic here through other people as Taisy tries to get to know him. I'm glad she makes it in the end. Robyn made me laugh. Awesome =D

ninablues July 10 2011, 19:28:03 UTC

Haha, Robyn from an outsider's perspective is a little scarier than usual, glad she made you laugh. XD Thank you!

bookblather July 10 2011, 04:15:11 UTC

Awww, that ending! I love how much you learn about the black ops team just by what they say about Victor, and awwww Victor he is the cutest thing ever ALWAYS. Don't worry, Taisy, he's just getting you used to his concentrated adorable before he turns it all on you.

Wonderful job, and WELCOME BACK BB you were sorely missed. <3

ninablues July 10 2011, 19:29:53 UTC

I think I'm going to be on a black ops kick for a while now, their relationships with each other have really started fascinating me. And Victor, pff, I just love writing about him, what can I say.

Thank you! Good to be back, for realz. :D

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ninablues July 10 2011, 19:33:33 UTC

I think that Adele's 'advice' is partly designed to stir up trouble and scare the hell out of Taisy. Such a meanie, she is. XD But thank you! And thank you SO much for saying that they feel real and human, that is one of the best compliments ever! :D

shayna611 July 11 2011, 14:52:30 UTC

I love how well this portrays not only Victor but everyone else through their relationships with him.

Awesome piece and definitely a good note to return on :)

ninablues July 13 2011, 13:26:40 UTC

I think it helped me get into his head quite a lot even though none of it was from his point of view-- and thank you!