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Guava 4: Obvious

Jul 02, 2011 23:46

Title: Obvious
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors, Toppings, Extras: Guava 4 (I hope you brought enough for everyone), malt (Summer Challenge 320: “It is one of the blessings of old friends that you can afford to be stupid with them.” - Ralph Waldo Emerson), pocky chain ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [extra] pocky chain, [challenge] guava, [inactive-author] bookblather

Comments 13

ichthusfish July 4 2011, 02:21:14 UTC

LOL! I giggled all the way through this! Very sweet. I love how everyone else knows, and they both think it's a secret :)

bookblather July 4 2011, 04:29:55 UTC

They think they're so subtle. They're not.

Thank you!

kay_brooke July 5 2011, 18:20:30 UTC

I love how obvious they are to everyone else! The dialogue in this piece is fantastic, too.

bookblather July 10 2011, 04:19:53 UTC

The only people who don't immediately know what's going on are the people most nearly concerned. XD Thanks!