Comments | runaway_tales: Chokeberry, Fudge Ripple and Red Currant

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Chokeberry, Fudge Ripple and Red Currant

Jun 26, 2011 12:56

Author: ellis12
Story: Threads ( Background | Index)
Rating: NC-17 (just to make sure, there's sex in this one)
Challenge: Chokeberry #9 (the world isn’t going to end just because we’ve done everything wrong), Fudge Ripple #23 (lust), Red Currant #12 (high tide)
Extras/Toppings:
Word count: 1721
Summary: Leyran and Maeve have another talk

Notes: So this ( Read more... )

[challenge] chokeberry, [challenge] red currant, [challenge] fudge ripple

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ellis12 June 26 2011, 19:56:06 UTC

Thank you very much! I must confess I was nervous about this, being the first time I attempt something of the sort which is not for my eyes only, and that it sort of makes a jump in the future...

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ellis12 June 27 2011, 06:52:35 UTC

I can do that :D

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ellis12 June 27 2011, 07:03:54 UTC

I guess I did a "fast forward" in this one; I was planning to let it build some more for a while, but then the perfect challenge showed up and I couldn't resist it.
I'm so glad you liked it!

bookblather June 27 2011, 02:24:06 UTC

Angst-filled mess, says you, intriguing exploration of a messy and painful relationship through smut, says I. Great job.

ellis12 June 27 2011, 07:06:52 UTC

Thanks a lot! I guess it is painful for both of them, and the timing of this is bad, like most other things in their relationship. But I still had fun writing it.

kay_brooke June 27 2011, 19:22:08 UTC

You weren't kidding about it being an angst-filled mess! There's nothing between these two that's not hopelessly complicated, is there?

Great piece!

ellis12 June 27 2011, 21:04:38 UTC

I'm so glad you liked it!
I guess everything in their relationship happened in the wrong way, at the wrong time. I hope to explore more of that at some point... I love them too much not to.