Comments | runaway_tales: muse of fire

nathskywalker in runaway_tales

muse of fire

Jun 11, 2011 12:09

Author: Nathalia
Rating: R
Challenge:
Quince #18 - the world may never know
Tropical Punch #30 - the end of the earth
Extras / Toppings: blueberries (It is hopelessness even more than pain that crushes the soul. So the decision-making of daily life involves not, as in normal affairs, shifting from one annoying situation to another less annoying - or ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [author] nathalia, [challenge] tropical punch, [extra] malt, [topping] cookie crumbs, [topping] gummy bunnies, [extra] fresh fruit : pineapple, [extra] fresh fruit : strawberries, [extra] pocky chain, [topping] cherry, [extra] fresh fruit : blueberries, [challenge] quince

Comments 14

roisin_farrell June 13 2011, 17:18:43 UTC

Brr. Nicely done. Very powerful and emotional.

nathskywalker July 17 2011, 14:32:20 UTC

thanks :)

smoothiegarten June 22 2011, 04:31:48 UTC

O_O Jeez this is creepy, but sad at the same time. I really like the last line, it definitely works well with Tim's thoughts in the rest of the piece.

nathskywalker July 17 2011, 14:31:57 UTC

And the muse of fire thing is a quote from Henry V. Can you tell I've had a class on Shakespeare this year? That line came to me completely out of order as the last one and I had to build it up from there.