Vinegar 13, Cola 7: Civilized

[bookblather]

Title: Civilized
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Vinegar 13 (keep off of grass), cola 7 (anything less would be uncivilized), My Treat (Summer has her own way of learning The Rules), malt (Kaity's easter egg: Leonard: For god's sake, do I have to hold up a sarcasm sign every time I open my mouth? // Sheldon: You have a sarcasm

Comments

[strawberryella]

Summer is adorablleeeee. I really like this pocky chain- great job!

[bookblather]

She's really a sweetheart, and I love writing her. Thank you!

[gandolforf]

Very nice! I love your use of prompts here, and your Bunny Hop works very well. Great job!

[bookblather]

Thanks! It's really nice when the prompts all come together like this.

[ichthusfish]

Really great job with this! I especially like the observation about people smelling bad. I think you get used to it, as an adult, so hopefully Summer does too. Nicely done :)

[bookblather]

Well, Summer's pretty sensitive to scent. You'll notice by the time of the Caramel Project she's given up on public transportation and just sticks to taxis. :D

Thanks!

[bookblather]

Well, it's never been presented quite like this, and some of it is things I didn't know about her (like the sensitivity to smell, which is new... I guess she doesn't mind the smell of decomposing flesh and formaldahyde?), so.... idk, maybe that's part of why?

Anyway. Thank you! Glad to be of help.

(will be on AIM tomorrow night, if you are too)

[bookblather]

I believe in you, bb! And will happily answer any and all questions. <333

(Nineish? Probably? Ish. I'm so specific.)

[lady_macbeth_19]

I really love the Bonny Hop: it gives the piece an almost poetic rhythm. Well done!
XxLil

[bookblather]

Thank you very much!