FOTD, Vinegar 24, Cola 4: Certain

Jun 03, 2011 23:29

Title: Certain
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: FOTD (decollete: wearing a low-necked garment), vinegar 24 (may contain small parts), cola 4 (sometimes you feel like a nut), My Treat (Newborn Ivy makes Gail wonder briefly if she'd made the right decision-then she remembers she has), malt (Sara's birthday prompt: "Is this one of ( Read more... )

[challenge] vinegar, [extra] malt, [topping] whipped cream, [challenge] cola, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] flavor of the day

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tanzyel June 4 2011, 13:11:04 UTC
Love how you showed the relationship between Gail and Cecily here.

Also agree with what everyone else said: You did a great job getting to Gail's feelings about being a new mom- she loves her daughter, but she's terrified that she'll screw up somehow. I'm not a mom but I imagine it feels that way for most first time moms. Good job!

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bookblather June 7 2011, 05:09:12 UTC
I'm not a mom either, but my mom is (uh, obviously) and this was sparked based on some of the things she told me about when she was pregnant with me. So.

Thank you!

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niee87 June 4 2011, 13:58:28 UTC
Aw, too cute! Newborn!Ivy is adorable and I love how Gail's caught between fear and love. It's also nice to see more Cecily and Gail also!

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bookblather June 7 2011, 05:09:27 UTC
Thanks very much! I plan to write more of the sisters later, so.

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triskaphobia June 6 2011, 01:51:24 UTC
Nice job. I liked the way you portray Gail as nervous and uncertain, the way I think a new mother would feel.

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bookblather June 7 2011, 05:09:43 UTC
Me too, especially if she's (as Gail is) a single mother. Thank you!

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