wandering free, wish I could be part of your world

[ninablues]

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Part of Your World
Rating: G
Challenge: FOTD: prink, Strawberry Shortcake #10: part of your world, Blueberry Cheesecake #24: field day
Toppings/Extras: fresh peaches, fresh blueberries, fresh pineapple, whipped cream
Wordcount: 758
Summary: “I want to be where the people are: I want to see, want to see

Comments

[hi_falootin]

Aww, Rosalind <3 This is quite sad and sweet. I like that she/her voice feels like a kid. Very nice!

[ninablues]

Rosalind's very sheltered and even at sixteen and seventeen she sees things in a very childlike way. Thanks!

[ichthusfish]

Very sweet and sad at the same time. I like that in her imagination she is well. I know how that one goes. Nice work :)

[ninablues]

Rosalind's a born optimist. Thanks!

[ninablues]

Yeah, she's always more optimistic and full of beans than Ashdown, who worries loads about her illness when she hardly notices it. Thank you!

[niee87]

Aww, Rosalind! She is such a sweetheart :( She and Edward are beyond adorable together. I love how solid their relationship is and how you show it in here through the little things. I want to hug them both!

Also, I <3 Rosalind FOREVER for calling Ashdown Teddy!!

[ninablues]

She always calls him Teddy. It's her little name for him. Anyone else who ever tries it dies. XD She definitely brings out a more tender side in Ashdown. Thanks!

[ellis12]

Lovely! The interaction between brother and sister is great, how she pretends to be well and how he is there for her, in his quiet, reserved manner. I feel sorry for Rosalind right now, but Ashdown's feelings for his sister also stand out very nicely.

[ninablues]

Rosalind is a huge weak spot for Ashdown and even a decade after she dies he never really lets her go. Thanks!