Chokeberry, Fudge Ripple and Red Currant with Fresh Pineapple

[ellis12]

Author: ellis12
Story: Threads ( Background | Index)
Rating: PG 13
Challenge: Chokeberry #15 (it is called having regrets), Red Currant #7 (eye of the storm), Fudge Ripple #16 (suspicion)
Extras/Toppings: Fresh Pineapple
Word count: 1838
Summary: In which Leyran and Maeve have a lengthy discussion.

Comments

[ellis12]

Thank you very much! <3 <3 This is how I see him too, intense and stubborn (and very entertaining to write, I must confess). And I'm so very glad you saw the hints :) I'll reveal everything in due time, I promise!

[ellis12]

Thank you! <3 I find it easier to show what he feels through Maeve's eyes. She's greatly troubled by what he has become, but she cares for him too...

[kay_brooke]

I love how there's a sense of so much history between these two. Their meeting and the pain that they have diverged so much in their paths comes across really well.

[ellis12]

Thank you! I think this just sums up what I wanted to show :)

[triskaphobia]

You pull dialogue, action and description together to bring this scene to life.

[ellis12]

Thanks <3