blueberry cheesecake pocky with a cherry

May 03, 2011 23:17

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: In a Heartbeat
Rating: PG (language)
Challenge: Blueberry Cheesecake #9: in a heartbeat
Toppings/Extras: pocky, cherry (present tense)
Wordcount: 100
Summary: Victor’s in a bad way.
Notes: I was supposed to be writing to cheer myself up, and… uh… what. This is not the Vicbyn I ordered, maître d’! I ( Read more... )

[inactive-author] ninablues, [challenge] blueberry cheesecake, [extra] pocky

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nathskywalker May 3 2011, 22:44:17 UTC
ohhh I love this. Dangerous Robyn who knows that Victor should not see this. The last two lines were especially chilling.

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ninablues May 4 2011, 11:57:53 UTC
Robyn's mean side comes out when someone picks on Victor. That is the mother of all beserk buttons for her... she's actually quite scary when that happens. XD Thanks!

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ninablues May 4 2011, 11:58:18 UTC
Thank you! I didn't think there was anything more to be said, really. Not without it getting violent. XD

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smoothiegarten May 4 2011, 02:26:40 UTC
Oh, Robyn. This is a messed up situation but she's still thinking of Victor. Really awesome, and that last line is a gutpunch.

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ninablues May 4 2011, 12:00:03 UTC
Robyn is always thinking of Victor... anything that brings harm to him is her rage button in a big way. It's kind of scary. XD Thanks!

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ichthusfish May 4 2011, 02:28:37 UTC
Oooh! Dangererous Robyn and Aww! Poor Vic :( I hope she (at least tries) to patch him up and give him a little tlc after she deals with Moxley though. This needs a happy, fluffy'ish sort of ending somewhere along the line (even if it is AU fluff). Nicely done :)

Hope you feel more cheerful soon :)

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ninablues May 4 2011, 12:00:36 UTC
That's actually a very good idea for later fluff! Robyn is scary in rage mode. XD And thank you! :)

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bookblather May 4 2011, 04:10:52 UTC
Oooh. Mama Bear. Or pissed off lover, whichever. Moxley is going to die a slow and painful death, it seems. And idk, this is kind of fluffy in a very strange and weird and violent kind of way. Especially the split-second decision that Robyn makes, with hardly even thinking about it. Great job.

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ninablues May 4 2011, 12:04:31 UTC
Weird and violent fluff is good enough for me! XD Harm coming to Victor is her serious rage button and Moxley probably should have known that. Thanks!

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