Comments | runaway_tales: flavour of the day and grapefruit with lots of things!

ninablues in runaway_tales

flavour of the day and grapefruit with lots of things!

Apr 28, 2011 23:38

Story: Timeless { backstory | index }
Title: Edward
Rating: G
Challenge: FOTD: polymorphous, Grapefruit #11: under the bridge
Toppings/Extras: pocky chain, malt, whipped cream (first few), fresh peaches, fresh blueberries, caramel (last one)
Wordcount: 1,500
Summary: Human beings are a work-in-progress.
Notes: I could have done this for any of the ( Read more... )

[extra] malt, [topping] caramel, [challenge] grapefruit, [extra] fresh fruit : peaches, [topping] whipped cream, [extra] pocky chain, [inactive-author] ninablues, [extra] fresh fruit : blueberries, [challenge] flavor of the day

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smoothiegarten May 3 2011, 22:30:59 UTC

And he has discovered how to make the most perfectly unimpressed expression any six-year-old could muster.

Favorite line of everything ever. :D I can so picture this. I love the whole thing, Edward's assessment of everything going on around him and back-and-forth with Jacob and the fact that Rosalind did not break the universe. It's awesome.