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Trail Mix 17

Dec 26, 2010 17:14

Author: Casey
Story: Nothing is Ever Easy (NIEE) universe, During NIEE
Challenges: Trail Mix 17 (pantry/larder)
Toppings & Extras: Sprinkles, Milkshake (Eva, Carrie and kinda Rob and Ellie, since Marina originated them)
Word Count: 704
Rating: PG
Summary: Colin is triumphant. Eva doesn’t know whether to be amused or worried.
Notes: This directly ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [challenge] trail mix, [author] casey, [extra] milkshake

Comments 8

ninablues December 26 2010, 22:55:00 UTC

I love Eva the motherly hen in this. And little Carrie. :D And he remembered Jacob's name... awww... I love how hyped up he is about the brawl. Nothin' but trouble, those dang pirates. XD The banter at the end was sweet.

niee87 December 28 2010, 03:01:03 UTC

Eva definitely strikes me as having that gene as a single mother - and especially here, where she runs a hostel on that top of it! Little Carrie is just as much love as big Carrie :D Of course he remembered Jacob's name! He's got a good brain for that, if for no other reason. And he had WAY more fun than he shoulda :P And yes, lots of trouble but Colin's kind of trouble! I enjoy the conversations Marina wrote between these two for her NaNo and so I had to try it out myself!

Thanks for reading!

ichthusfish December 27 2010, 00:10:13 UTC

LOL! Very amused by his idea of 'entertainment'. It makes me wonder what else he finds to do around there, and if he'll be trying it out again any time in the future. Colin and Eva are very cute together, even without little Carrie thrown in. Nicely done :)

niee87 December 28 2010, 03:02:05 UTC

Yeah, Colin's idea of entertainment is more than a little skewed, poor boy. He keeps himself entertained during this point in his life by doing as obvious sneaking as possible around the people in charge :P He will definitely get in more bar brawls and probably some more with Jacob :P Colin and Eva are a lot of fun :D

Thanks for reading!

smoothiegarten December 27 2010, 01:07:37 UTC

BAHAHA I love this so much. That Eva already knows him well enough to know that he never behaves and his fib to Carrie and LOL. So awesome. I'm glad you wrote this!

niee87 December 28 2010, 03:03:02 UTC

:D Good, I'm glad, since it was my first time tackling Eva and I need to do more for the flavor binge :D I figure this is later on, when Carrie's 4 to 5 so Eva would have a good handle on Colin :P Yeah, I enjoyed the fib! Thanks :D

bookblather December 28 2010, 01:15:56 UTC

Ahahahahaha oh, Colin. I love that Eva is all motherly over him, and I love that he's still on a little bit of a fight-high. Especially that he remembers Jacob but mostly because Jacob paid for the drinks. XD Great job!

niee87 December 28 2010, 03:04:18 UTC

Hehe, I think he keeps the fight high for DAYS. Eva's just shaking her head, but they're pretty good friends at this point and she knows he had no one else to take care of him at this point in his life :) Haha, getting free drinks is a powerful motivator to remember someone!

Thanks for reading :D