Onecount - Sour Apple #11, + fresh blueberries

[thaizertazerll]

Author: Thai
Challenge: Sour Apple #11 - such a pity
Extra: Fresh Blueberries - Thou whose deep ways are in the sea, / Whose footsteps are not known, / To-night a world that turned from Thee / Is waiting - at Thy Throne. / The towering Babels that we raised / Where scoffing sophists brawl, / The little Antichrists we praised - / The night is on

Comments

[bookblather]

Oh, wow. Such awesome sensory detail in here, and fabulous use of language. I'm extremely impressed. Wonderful job!

[nothingtoregret]

I really like the tense change, it really drew me into Asma's feelings... The imagery is stunning, and the end sent shivers up my spine.