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Threecount - Chocolate Chip Mint, Chocolate, Sour Apple, Fudge Ripple

Aug 31, 2010 21:47

I'm still alive, sort of. Here, have a new story! *waves red scarf frantically at*

Author: Thai
Challenge: Chocolate Chip Mint #11 - translucent, Chocolate #17 - freedom
Rating: G
Title: The House Down The Road
Story: The Dim Reflections of a Distant City (henceforth known only as Distant City)
Timeline: ??? - Broken is new.
Word Count: 730

( His brothers and sisters had disappeared from the Garden, had wandered downhill into the cold and ill-assuming house of reality, but the broken child remained. )

[challenge] chocolate chip mint, [challenge] chocolate, [challenge] sour apple, [challenge] fudge ripple

Comments 2

kay_brooke September 1 2010, 16:18:53 UTC

I think this is the first time I've read one of your stories, and wow. The language is just wonderful.

bookblather September 5 2010, 05:29:32 UTC

Totally agreeing with Miyabi. Your imagery is incredible. Especially in the first story--I feel like I could actually close my eyes and go walking in that garden-- but the next two are equally splendid. Brilliant use of words.

(welcome back!)