why pu's thou the rose, janet / and why breaks thou the wand?

[cofmanynames]

Author: C
Rating: PG?
Wordcount: 943
Story / World: Amethyst Sky
Title: The Homework Was Also Overdue (Or: Orange Ink)
Counts for the Summer Challenge? As my last! <3
Prompts: Toasted Almond [02 // dark horse].
Characters: Janet, Tam, the kelpie.
Toppings / Extras / Other: Prompt from Rika [she found him standing, looking lost].
Notes:

Comments

[smoothiegarten]

Oooh. Intriguing. I like seeing more Janet stuff, since usually she's hanging around with Jaime (who is always the focus of those pieces). I hope she didn't hurt herself. The description of the park was excellent--I imagine it looks pretty out of place in the rest of the city.

[cofmanynames]

thanks! =D

well, whenever i do Real Work on the beginning of amethyst sky ~proper~, you'll be seeing a lot more of her, if that helps? (she and tam are a major subplot, if that's not an oximoron, but i tread cautiously with them - read as, barely write them - because romance is not something i am exactly of the good at. oh. er. was that a spoiler? /takes for granted that everyone would know from the names and thus the associated ballad how it'd go. oops.)

she should be fine! mostly? there's - something wrong with her body, and i'm not sure what (tempting to make it joint-related, but that could be too write what you know =3), but at any rate what i am trying to get at is that she will end up no more damaged than she is as a default. which is the best you can do, i guess.

oh, it does. and it's probably shaped like a turtle, so aerial view is fun.

[bookblather]

Duuuuude, kelpie. Beyond cool. I love the description in this as always, and the way you ordered the seven things at the end is great. You do such awesome stuff with formatting. Also, hitting people with the side of their heads is totally normal horse behavior, although it usually isn't intentional.

[cofmanynames]

*pleased* i like kelpies. (i may have decided this one is related to the one i painted for my mom last december. *considers*)

ee, thanks.

oh, yeah, i've got some experience as far as that goes ;) (janet, however... not so much. she is very much a city kid. or should that be a City kid? seeing as the city's proper name starts with City... i am so confused.) apparently normal horse behaviour is also trying to eat my hair, so.