Fourcount - Fudge Ripple, Chocolate Chip Mint, Chocolate, Cookies N' Cream, Sour Apple

[thaizertazerll]

I've started arranging blood princess in arcs so it's not a pathetic mishmash of things without timeline. A general order breakdown: Godhood -> Fairhood -> Falsehood -> Motherhood. Just so you know what comes when.

... ALSO, HI GUYS, I SWEAR I'M NOT DEAD.

Author: Thai
Challenge: Fudge Ripple #26 - anguish, Chocolate #27 - determination, Cookies 'N

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LAAATE HURRR

[thaizertazerll]

This one experience changes Asma's mama quite a lot. I wanted to depict that so everyone knows that no, she's not just screwed up for absolutely no reason. B|

As for Asma. Well. She'll get her happy ending eventually, but probably not anytime in blood princess. :c

Thank you for reading! ♥

[summertimesongs]

What you've been writing so far is really wonderful and inspiring. I can't wait to see the gaps filled in.

Although with the sour apple one, it gets a little confusing who she's talking to. Haytham? But you mention another him at the beginning. Just something to look at. C:

[thaizertazerll]

I'll fill your gaps - I MEAN DERP

8| Reread it again you silly goose, because I know where you live. And your cell phone number.

(also I love you)

(just so you don't kill me for the gap comment)

[bookblather]

AH wow, that first one made everything make SO MUCH SENSE all of a sudden. It's a great feeling, even though the piece is heartbreaking. And wow, all of this, it makes me understand Asma so much more, and the world she grew up in. Fabulous job with these bits here.

[ichthusfish]

Very powerful imagery, especially in the first story. Really awsome work here :)