Chocolate Chip Mint 14, Fudge Ripple 7, FOTD: Glimpse of Heaven

May 23, 2010 23:29

Title: Glimpse of Heaven
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors, Toppings, Extras: Chocolate chip mint 14 (saturated), fudge ripple 7 (pity), FOTD (phlegmatic: Not easily excited to action or display of emotion; apathetic; sluggish. Self-possessed, calm, or composed), pocky chain, malt (sarcasticsra's truth: Who was Aaron's first crush ( Read more... )

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ichthusfish May 26 2010, 00:24:30 UTC
Yay! That was really sweet! I like the progression of it, and the last line really made me grin. Nice work =D

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bookblather May 27 2010, 08:32:19 UTC
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :D

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darkfaerieclaw May 26 2010, 04:24:09 UTC
Clara Hawkins is an awesome name.

This was sweet, and great all the way through. 2 and 5 made me snicker. I totally knew those girls. <3

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bookblather May 27 2010, 08:32:57 UTC
Aw, man, I'm sorry. Nobody needs to know Lorelai. The girl from 2 is pretty cool, though. :D Not her fault if the boys all give her their pudding, now, is it. I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!

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sarcasticsra May 27 2010, 03:57:08 UTC
Ugh, Lorelai. I do not like people like her.

Yay for Clara! I bet she and Aaron are adorable.

This is great. I love Aaron's take on things!

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bookblather May 27 2010, 08:33:35 UTC
I do too! I totally need to write more from Aaron's POV; he's just really observant and in-the-background a lot so it's a bit difficult. And yes, I think he and Clara are lovely together. :D Thanks for reading!

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bookblather June 7 2010, 21:55:21 UTC
Me too. Aaron's one of my favorite fictional people ever. I'm glad you like this kind of story! There will be many more, because I like writing 'em.

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nathskywalker August 12 2010, 00:10:54 UTC
so the only girl Aaron ever loved was Clara. That's pretty flattering for her.

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bookblather August 13 2010, 04:20:47 UTC
Well, not really, Clara's just the one he stayed with. But this was mildly unclear as far as that goes. Ah well. Thanks for reading!

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