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Sour Apple 19 + Strawberry Cheesecake 30

Mar 14, 2010 16:51

Author: Winter Violet
Challenge: Sour Apple # 19 see if I care and Strawberry Cheesecake # 30 music box
Rated: G
Story: From the Outside
Word Count: 328
Summary: All of it was gone.
Notes: The very last. Yeah. All done. Very sad ending.

( Regrets and Guilt made her sleepy. The last of both flavors. One of my saddest endings )

[challenge] sour apple, [challenge] strawberry cheesecake

Comments 4

ichthusfish March 14 2010, 14:40:20 UTC

Aww, yeah, that was kind of sad. A very bitter sweet moment. Nicely done :)

On another note, you claimed a banner for Sour Apple, but I can only find 29 Sour Apple that you've posted. I've checked under both the challenge and author tags. Could you double check that you haven't missed one please? Or if you've posted but forgotten to put tags on let me know where it is. I'll do the banner now so it's ready to go :)

sweet_avery March 14 2010, 23:57:24 UTC

Yes. I double-checked the list here in RaTs and found only 29. I lacked Sour Apple 11, but I'm very sure I've written one for it. My list showed that I had finished them. Weird, I must have forgotten to put tags on it. It seems to be missing. :)

Should I write one on the safe side? Just to complete the challenge, I mean? If so, I'll be glad to add a little epilogue for this story. :) :D

ichthusfish March 15 2010, 01:23:13 UTC

Yes. If you want to complete Sour Apple and get the banner you'll need to use up that last prompt. I could see Sour Apple 11 working well as an epilogue actually. You may have got lucky there :)

fluorescent_x March 14 2010, 20:41:32 UTC

This is a very tragic ending. It's sad that no one remembers who he is/knows he exists, and yet Maxene has the music box.

I wonder what happened to him... hurr.

Either way, well done! =DDDD