Comments | runaway_tales: Vanilla 17, chocolate 1, strawberry 15: I Know This Much Is True

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Vanilla 17, chocolate 1, strawberry 15: I Know This Much Is True

Mar 02, 2010 03:11

Title: I Know This Much Is True
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors, Toppings, Extras: Vanilla 17 (stranded), chocolate 1 (loyalty/trust), strawberry 15 (key), rainbow sprinkles, pocky, malt (draloreshimare's stocking prompt: "Where do we go? I don't even know." - Keane ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [extra] malt, [extra] pocky, [challenge] chocolate, [challenge] strawberry, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] vanilla

Comments 21

kusarinokokoro March 2 2010, 22:05:07 UTC

Holy crap nooooo DDD: Hugh shouldn't have this happen to him!
But it does.
And that makes me sad :<

I do love that you put so much into so few words. Impressive pocky! :D

bookblather March 5 2010, 08:05:17 UTC

He doesn't deserve it at all, but I promise he will be happy again someday. OR ELSE. *shakes fist at self*

Thank you so much! This was a fun little pocky series to write.

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bookblather March 5 2010, 08:05:36 UTC

I'm glad this one made it better. :) Thank you so much for reading!

iamintroversion March 3 2010, 03:01:20 UTC

Aw!! This is real family. Wayyyy too sweet. <3

bookblather March 5 2010, 08:05:59 UTC

Real family may or may not be my bugbear. *cough* I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

hi_falootin March 3 2010, 09:34:01 UTC

oh, I loved this one ♥

bookblather March 5 2010, 08:06:12 UTC

I'm glad! Thanks for reading!

subluxate April 23 2010, 13:34:31 UTC

He is such a good dad. I like that the last three lines are separate paragraphs; it really shows the feeling and thought sinking in.

bookblather April 24 2010, 01:52:03 UTC

Thank you! I fiddled around with those last three lines for a long time before leaving them as they are, and I'm pleased that it worked for you!