Vanilla 26, chocolate 7, strawberry 18: learn to fly

Feb 06, 2010 13:50

Title: learn to fly
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors and Toppings: Vanilla 26 (anniversary/memorial), chocolate 7 (regret), strawberry 18 (teacup).
Word Count: 845
Rating: PG
Summary: The story, or, what happened to Olivia.
Notes: Immediately follows broken wings, so I'd read that one first. Concrit always welcome if you have it!

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[challenge] chocolate, [challenge] strawberry, [inactive-author] bookblather, [challenge] vanilla

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bookblather February 7 2010, 08:24:16 UTC
They do get better for her. I mean, she has Jake now, and she's met up with Gina again, and I have Plans for her and her backstory that should make some stuff better. I'm glad that you sympathized with her so much! Thanks for reading!

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sarcasticsra February 7 2010, 17:42:23 UTC
Damn, poor Olivia. That really sucks. I'm glad she has Jake, at least.

This was lovely, though, if sad.

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bookblather February 13 2010, 23:37:44 UTC
She has Jake and a whole lot of other friends ready to stand behind her. It's just not really something she's comfortable talking about, so. Thank you very much for your compliments!

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bookblather February 13 2010, 23:38:25 UTC
Maybe she will, maybe she won't. MY EVIL PLANS MUST REMAIN A MYSTERY. *evil laugh*

Ahem. Anyway. I'm glad that you liked this, and that you sympathized with Olivia!

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bookblather February 13 2010, 23:41:16 UTC
I feel like it's easiest to talk about the really painful things in really familiar, comfortable settings. Thanks for your compliments!

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subluxate April 23 2010, 14:05:15 UTC
Jake might not know what he's talking about legally, but morally, he's right on. I feel terrible for Olivia, living with that for so long and not knowing that Hugh does want her. Really well-done, emotionally raw, piece.

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bookblather April 24 2010, 02:01:09 UTC
Argh, I know. I really wanted him to be legally right, too. Thank you so much for your compliments (all of them, not just on this piece). They really, really mean a lot.

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