Vanilla 23, chocolate 20, strawberry 22: Stage Fright

[bookblather]

Title: Stage Fright
Main Story: In the HeartFlavors and Toppings: Vanilla 23 (music/dancing/singing), chocolate 20 (caution), strawberry 22 (flowers), cherry on top (present tense and some stylistic things

Comments

[perfectisafault]

I loved getting inside Olivia's head and seeing her reasons for being so reluctant to do something as seemingly innocent as dance on camera.

As usual, another awesome piece from you :)

[bookblather]

Thank you very much! I'm blushing over here. And there will be much more Olivia in the near future. I didn't expect her to be this major a character, but then I realized that she was fascinating, so.

[sarcasticsra]

I really love the description of the camera watching her; it's very poetic. Also, the last two lines are awesome and adorable. Jake and Olivia are so cute.

[bookblather]

Thank you so much! And yes, they're adorable, and they manage to stick together through quite a lot of hell. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[bookblather]

Lars = awesome. The more I learn of him, the more I like him. I'm glad that you enjoyed this!

[subluxate]

I like the style this is written in. It's done very well.

[bookblather]

Thank you! It was originally written in a "here, have a topic and write for fifteen minutes" style, and then I made it less incoherent and posted it here. I'm glad it worked for you!

[nathskywalker]

I'll just repeat the usual, "sweet, awesome, well-written" because that's what this is.

[bookblather]

Thank you!