Vanilla 11, chocolate 3, strawberry 7: how bright you glow

Jan 22, 2010 02:34

Title: how bright you glow
Main Story: In the Heart
Flavors, Toppings, Extras: Vanilla 11 (walk in the woods), chocolate 3 (sympathy), strawberry 7 (fireflies), rainbow sprinkles, cherry on top, malt (slysionnachnano's picture promptWord Count: 704 ( Read more... )

[topping] sprinkles, [extra] malt, [challenge] chocolate, [challenge] strawberry, [inactive-author] bookblather, [topping] cherry, [challenge] vanilla

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bookblather January 24 2010, 09:14:03 UTC
Thank you so much! I'm very bad at details and I was trying very hard to be otherwise in this piece, so I'm glad I succeeded. I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

Can I ask how you thought it was going to end? Just out of curiousity.

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bookblather January 26 2010, 07:40:41 UTC
Fair enough! Thanks for satisfying my curiousity.

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perfectisafault January 24 2010, 04:56:47 UTC
Wow...you do such a great job of slowly conveying Hugh's pain. I feel so bad for him :( And Joanna's curiosity is only natural. I'm glad they're friends.

This is wonderful <3

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bookblather January 24 2010, 09:14:59 UTC
They're very good for each other, really. They're both introverted, quiet people, and they provide this sort of safe space for each other. I'm glad I finally got them to meet up and be friends. Thank you so much for your compliments!

(and don't worry. Things get much better for Hugh.)

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bookblather February 7 2010, 09:04:36 UTC
Thank you very much! That's one of my personal favorite lines, so I'm glad it worked for you too.

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bookblather February 17 2010, 02:31:04 UTC
Thank you very much! I worked very hard on this one, so it's gratifying to hear it praised so much.

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subluxate April 23 2010, 13:24:12 UTC
Your imagery is amazing here. Very well done.

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bookblather April 24 2010, 01:43:36 UTC
Thank you very much!

(yeah, this piece took me like, three hours to get right. But I'm glad I took the time_)

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