Watching You, Watching Me, Chapter 5 - If I gotta sin to see her again...

[rumielf]

It had worked!

Tarrant knew he should not have doubted the White Queen’s word but he had still been holding his breath, terrified when Alice saw him in the Looking Glass. For all of Her Majesty’s assurances and his own knowledge of her potions expertise, he had still been worried that the potion she had given him would not work.

Even now he wasn’t

Comments

[just_a_dram]

I always appreciate his self-doubt. Even in a fantasy it intrudes.

[rumielf]

I freely admit this was probably the hardest chapter to write. I've never written such a thing completely from a male perspective.

[niphuria]

This was incredibly well done and erotic, yet about his doubts and fears conflicting with his desires. I feel so bad, yet so good for him. He's still determined to try!