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[ruins_of_sodom]

Almost done with Chapter 4. And at this point, I am not so sure of what's happening anymore. These characters are doing things they're not supposed to.

Current word count: 32,187
Day 18

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[phenothiazine]

"I liked you so much better when I was bleeding all over the place."

:D

Brilliant! I was discreetly reading this on my phone and pretending to be interested in whatever my cousin was talking about. That line totally ruined my cover. Honor is amazing - like blue jeans, I wish I'd come up with him first!

And the gaiety - oh the gaity - it was sooo cute. I don't even care about the age gap anymore; I just want them to get together.

Literary note: while it's an excellent word, I felt like you used 'understatement' a lot in this chapter. FYI.

[ruins_of_sodom]

I KNOW RIGHT. Crazy Honor and Crazy Noah. They don't know it yet but they're kind of crazy in love already. WHICH IS NOT SUPPOSED TO HAPPEN UNTIL MUUUUUUCH LATER.

EEEK! I am sorry to have blown your cover. Although Honor is not very sorry. You know how he is.

I think things are moving waaaay too fast for them but it's sexy. And I don't care anymore. And kind of want them to just go at it right now, on that bed covered in books. But Honor can't because he's hurting in several places.

D: I THINK I DID TOO. OH CRAP. I shall work on it as soon as I move into editing. Thank you so much for pointing that out. <3

[phenothiazine]

When they FINALLY hook up, it had better be amid all those books! That's like the sexiest first time ever.

I'm off to read your newer post now!