fic:

[ruinedempires]

title: untitled
pairing: iker casillas/ofc
rated: pg13
summary: that was iker's second kiss
note: studying the past of this iker i'm trying to right, au

Comments

[the_summer_tree]

um...whatever this is, can i please have more of it? as a character study i adore this Iker, so wrapped up inside himself and in his own head. i want to know who is going to be the one to draw him out. i want to know who his first kiss was, and who will be his next. i want to know everything about him.

[larapidez]

Okay, this is probably the story I liked the most of what I've read in your journal. Actually, I can quite agree with the comment above, because it was just so real, gripping, heart-wrenching but something so painfully short. It told the story, it made its point - but I'm hungry for more. This was a very cool idea to write it this way and I simply love the way you managed to capture all those feelings and despair. The characters are outlined very nicely, making this story just a little scene in a bigger world. AMAZING! ♥