fic: embers

[ruinedempires]

title: embers cont'd.

Comments

[dgxku]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(thats a good thing)

[theosakansun]

Oh my god! This is like a whole different story compared to the first three parts! where the first three parts were more dreamlike and perfect, this is a tad fucked up (not in a bad way) and very, very dark.

I wonder what kind of place Iker lives at, really? Seriously, he seems to live together with the creepiest people possible :O This has even made me dislike Pepe - something I never thought was possible!

Oh, just so you know, the link you posted to this on footballslash doesn't work :)

Also, if you even want to continue this, I'm all up for reading it :)

[sillypiglets2]

I love this whole series. I like how it was really, really sexy without being overtly sexual. I really enjoyed reading it and would love to read more. :)

[ruinedempires]

thank you so much for reading and more for commenting. i felt a bit awkward because this story is so much darker than i've ever written or intended. but i like the way it feels. and you really let me know it wasn't bad at all.

thank you again! another part comes out and you'll be the first to know!

[lady_quark]

Andres pulling off his shirt laughing gently to a pale, dark haired young man at the edge of the bed and a caramel colored boy on his knees beside him, with hair slick as black ink falling from a loose pony tail atop his head.

I'm a horribly predictable person.
Such an amazing build up, so beautifully carried out plot and yet it only needs me one sentence and my whole attention snaps.

I want to know what place this is Iker is living at. Sounds like heaven to me.

[charliechaz]

Aaaah ! So bad, so good, so bad...need more.