True, the English is rough, but the emotions are just great and come through loud and clear. This was just so sweet: "Pepa didn’t close her eyes…it was Silvia’s first time and she wanted it to be perfect; she looked at her on every moment … if there was a gesture of discomfort she would stop….she didn’t know how, but she would stop." Keep writing!
for english being your 2nd language you do better writing it out than I do! & english is my first language. your doing a GREAT job & don't stop whats the saying practice makes perfect.Any way THANK you!
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This was just so sweet: "Pepa didn’t close her eyes…it was Silvia’s first time and she wanted it to be perfect; she looked at her on every moment … if there was a gesture of discomfort she would stop….she didn’t know how, but she would stop."
Keep writing!
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I will be looking forward for more :D
Best wishes in your exam!
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& Now waiting 4 more.. Best Wishes For Yr. Exam..
Valobasa Love
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