for quitehomoerotic: Bad Things

[rude_not_ginger]

FOR THE DRABBLE MEME.

• When you came in the air went out

Comments

[quitehomoerotic]

Oh my god this is chilling. Completely and utterly chilling. I love the hell out of it.

[rude_not_ginger]

EEEEEEEEEE! I'm so glad you do!

[alicecarter]

This is really, really interesting. Biasedly loved this:

"You're depressed here," he said. "Feel like you've failed Earth. Your team. Your family. That boy---what was his name?"

"Steven."

"Steven, that's right. All of them." He knocked back the shot.

Because I'm wondering if this Doctor really couldn't be bothered to remember, or if he wanted Jack to say it. Also loved this:

But the Doctor Jack knew also abandoned him on Satellite Five.

Because, ouch.

[rude_not_ginger]

I wanted to leave that ambiguous, because with this sort of Doctor, it's really possible either way, isn't it? =)

Thank you!!!!

[ljgeoff]

Holy Wah, that's fantastic. Oh, yeah, I can see this. More?

[rude_not_ginger]

Holy Wah! I like that!

Thanks! I don't know, I had planned it on really being a one-shot, but I'll think about it!

[cainangrey]

Nice
Please, continue

[rude_not_ginger]

Thanks!

I had intended on it being a one-shot, but I'll think about it!

[cainangrey]

You could turn it into Jack and the Doctor healing each other

Or throw in other characters

In truth, you could leave it as a one-shot, but it has so much potential....

[best_served_hot]

Ooh, nice and chilling. I love the Doctor's unfettered mood and how he just goes through the motions like he's waiting for, or rather expects, all of Time and the Universe to part before his feet.

Also, cold, careless way he mentions Steven. And Jack, suspicious for good reason, still going with him but would he be able to watch the Doctor fall when he could try to save him, I wonder.