for fandom_muses: An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind.

Dec 27, 2008 13:16

An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind. -Ghandi

Anatomy of a scene. Cut for spoilers to 5.00 'The Next Doctor'. )

featuring: miss hartigan, exercise: anatomy of a scene, community: fandom muses

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ooc not_from_mars December 27 2008, 18:33:19 UTC
Fantastic.

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Re: ooc rude_not_ginger December 27 2008, 22:37:32 UTC
Thank you!

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handysparehand December 27 2008, 18:36:23 UTC
You took an episode I was sort of meh about and made it into a prompt I really enjoyed. Also, it's second person, which just adds to the awesomeness! <333

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rude_not_ginger December 27 2008, 22:38:17 UTC
I felt sort of meh about it, too. This scene reminds me of that final scene in Voyage of the Damned. I had to justify it in my mind.

My spouse thinks I've been too hard on the Doctor. =/

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handysparehand December 28 2008, 00:46:22 UTC
Yeah. That entire episode, it just felt like nothing happened, at all. Also, the CyberGodzilla thing.....

*shuts up instead of complaining*

But yes, prompt, lovely.

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youngerpetrelli December 27 2008, 22:47:49 UTC
Wow -- that was lovely!

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rude_not_ginger December 27 2008, 22:51:16 UTC
Thank you so much! It was tough to write, but I'm happy with the end result! <3<3

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watch_is_me December 28 2008, 01:04:06 UTC
*applauds*

Yeah, lackluster episode, but the line "You make me into this" really stuck in my head, because it's so hypocritical and so Doctor and true at the same time as it's hypocritical. Nice to see an exploration of the angry/dark/grieving side of the Doctor the end of the episode can be interpreted to show.

Tsk, I like the Doctor dark and conflicted >_>

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tastefulfashion December 28 2008, 02:42:56 UTC
For an episode that I really didn't care for, your writing has made this part astounding in my mind. Just seeing what he thinks as he's doing this? It makes up for the terrible predictability that was the special.

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