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rubyls

fighting you

Mar 25, 2011 16:32

fighting you
kyuhyun/yesung; pg-13; romance
it's not so easy to admit that you like someone, and kyuhyun is a first-class asshole in realising so.

a/n: for domolovesyou who requested kyusung, i hope you like it ;~;

( At first he didn’t recognize the signs at all, and decided it was probably just because Jongwoon was an adorable hyung, or maybe it was because Kyuhyun just liked being beside Jongwoon, that was all, damn it. )

genre: romance, pairing: kyuhyun/yesung, !fic

Comments 32

rubyls March 25 2011, 16:34:12 UTC

for domolovesyou?

kingdra March 26 2011, 04:04:23 UTC

CRIES YOU DID IT!!! YOU DID IT!!!! ... NOW I WILL WRITE YOU EUNHAE. ONE DAY. NATURALLY. I PROMISE.

SDFLKJLKJ THIS WAS SO PERFECT AND SWEET AND OH KYUHYUN YOU ASSHOLE. sdlkfj i really like stupid kyuhyun though... because kyuhyun is quite stupid. even though he seems smart. but he is most deff stupid, pushing away all his feeligs.

i love how it was so canon and in character and everything ;___; and oh minwook friendship why are you so precious sdlfkjlkj.

ALSO THIS LINE
Perhaps it was the easy way out - Kyuhyun didn’t have to contend with palpitating hearts and burning cheeks and lumps in his throat, and admitting that he liked Jongwoon very much.
i really like it but maybe it's just my affinity for pretty words. but this story was very pretty and angsty and perfect and gah sdlfkjlkj

LOVES ON YOU ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

rubyls March 29 2011, 01:30:34 UTC

OKAY WE CAN \O/ EUNHAE PRZZZZZ

asdkfasdf omg i'm just really so happy you liked it and that i didn't ruin your otp, they are just bloody hard to write oh god what am i doing dedicating my first ever kyusung fic to anyone because my first time is bound to be shit. kyusung canon is actually my favorite canon and dumb kyuhyun also my favorite because he actually strikes me as exactly the kind of person that would do this. gah yay i'm so glad you liked it since it was mostly meant for you, you precious fetus ;~;

loves on you back ♥

bonomanic March 25 2011, 16:46:38 UTC

SPOT for later when I'm at least done with a part of my work. :D

bonomanic March 26 2011, 23:17:06 UTC

I didn't intend for it to be this much later but I had to talk sense into a friend yesterday who's apparently out to kill himself in freshman year. So I'm back today, and I'm not only reading this because I'm lapping up your fic like a little kitty laps up milk, but also because I desperately needed to see how Yesung was actually written in fic again because dammit, I promise you that Yehae and you shall get it, even if it turns out only a drabble. /huff

That said... KYUHYUN YOU LITTLE JEKR WHAT THE HECK ARE YOU DOING BEING ALL STUPID AND AFRAID AND NOT GETTING YOUR ASS IN GEAR? D: My God, I wanted to kick that boy seven ways into tomorrow all throughout the fic because what was he thinking, going around and behaving like an asshole and jerking around people by their hearts? That's really not the way to go, especially not with friends around who are more than willing to push your face right into the truth of the matter, so he didn't even really have the lame excuse of I had no idea what was going on. Because pleaseBut ( ... )

rubyls March 29 2011, 01:53:06 UTC

omg i hope you didn't mean that in the literal sense and that your friend is all right now? :X (I LOVE YOUR YEHAE BY THE WAY DID I SAY THAT ALREADY ( ... )

bonomanic April 17 2011, 18:07:59 UTC

Ah, no, I didn't mean that in the literal sense. :) He just has too much on his plate, doing three jobs plus club activities plus sports and then normal work. He's still stressed (as expected) but I hope I could talk some sense into him. (LOL, I LOVE YOU, YOU PRECIOUS GIRL ( ... )

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stupidrhapsody March 25 2011, 17:38:24 UTC

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yesung is my liking, then kyuhyun in second place. this is my first time ever reading yesung oppa in a fanfic and he's with kyuhyun omfg. ajkdjkfasjkfkaskfaskfkdak ok I'll stop.

this made me ajdfjsjkfkjas:
Jongwoon smiles when he sees Kyuhyun, a little ray of sunshine breaking on his features, and motions for Kyuhyun to join him ( ... )

rubyls March 29 2011, 01:31:41 UTC

i like keysmash! lol your comment made me smile really really big, thank you so much i'm so happy that you liked this and that you like this pairing (everyone should like kyusung!) \o/

midorinokyu March 25 2011, 17:42:59 UTC

Oh God, it was sooo cute! My two SuJu's biases in one pairing <3 I was so angry at Kyuhyun that he was such an asshole but I'm glad the end was like this <3 I hope you will write more Kyuhyun/Yesung fanficks! *.* Hwaiting!

rubyls March 29 2011, 01:32:36 UTC

yayyy kyusung are my biases too and i'm glad you liked this. thank you for reading! ♥

orenmanida March 25 2011, 23:45:13 UTC

okay, so i'm not sure if this is a weird kind of compliment (i hope not), but this fic reminds me of one of my favorite super junior fics of all time -- coincidentally also a kyusung, and probably the only other kyusung fic i've read that really made me feel something, or rather a lot of somethings.

i've been CRAVING good kyusung ever since i read that story (agessss ago) and i've probably frayed the link by the # of times i've reread it, so it's incredibly fantastic and thrilling to have some new material to tangibly adore. and i do adore this! i really like the way you write. the vocabulary you use is vast... but also visceral? hm i hope that makes sense. this was one of my favorite lines (and i had quite a few):

“Jongwoon-hyung,” he starts, but Jongwoon doesn’t catch his eye so he falters a bit, all the words he’d practised yesterday crumbling like ash on his tongue. There is a silence so thick with discomfiture that Kyuhyun cannot find the words to speak; his mind is completely blank.so, so lovely. i seem to have this thing ( ... )

kingdra March 26 2011, 04:06:45 UTC

... totally and completely creeping on this, but that kyusung fic you're talking about wouldn't happen to be tarmenel's leap of faith, would it? :3

orenmanida March 26 2011, 14:49:04 UTC

there is nothing wrong with creeping :) and yes, that's the one! haha.

rubyls March 29 2011, 01:43:58 UTC

gahhhh i'm sorry this is so late, had a 13-hour flight and am still jetlagging, and i saw your comment a while ago but i wanted to type a proper response because christ if it isn't one of the best comments i've ever gotten. alsklfsdf

it is actually a compliment of the highest form if this reminded you of tarmenel's leap of faith because that is totally one of my favorite suju fics as well and alsdjalsdf i love that fic so, so much and for this fic to be even placed in the same sentence, i - i just don't know what else to say. thank you so, so much, i am so happy you liked this.

and if by visceral you mean raw, i could not be more flattered because it is exactly what i'm gunning for in most of my fic. aklsdjalfasdlasdf thank you!!

also, omg i would never ever write yesung like that, it riles me up so much when i'm reading fic and he is just forever a weirdo in all of them and GOD. yesung gets his stereotype the most imo, and sungmin as the bunny prince would be my pick as the next most frustrating stereotype. i am so happy you found the ( ... )