the pieces of this puzzle (ginny/tom, nc-17)

Jan 24, 2005 01:27

Title: the pieces of this puzzle
Author: rubykate
Pairing: Ginny/Tom
Rating: NC-17
A/N: written for nightfalltwen as part of dearsanta. Thanks very much to hiddenshallows for beta'ing! (I'm assuming nobody else was up for beta'ing - but I can never have too many betas so if you did want to beta this, do go ahead and do so anyway!)

the pieces of this puzzle have been coming together for some time )

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honeycakehorse January 25 2005, 15:52:20 UTC
Hi!

This is just a quick note to let you know that I've invited you to join harry_weasley, as you already have a fic archived at the Harry/Weasley Slash Archive. It's not an obligation or anything, I'm just commenting because LJ doesn't send out invitation notices anymore. *grumbles* To accept simply, go to this page. Thank you!

Love,
Sabrina

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retired_ego January 29 2005, 08:22:10 UTC
how ever did i miss this before?

gold time-turner (as opposed to silver), dreams (not-so-innocent ginerva), dean (and staying with him), the invisibility cloak (silver! and stealing, ohh) and, oh, tom (perfect). their (un) relationship - so haunting in a way that works, before and after. how ginny is ohosocareful not to let tom know who she is.

and i have to say, the sex was hot, both naturally and kind of creepily, if that makes sense.

This is everything she's dreamed of, everything that's haunted her mind. He was her first love all those years ago, now she can be his.

that would be a terrific summary and so peotic, too.

i really the flow of itl the way things tie in - progressive dreams, the invivisbilty cloak, the mention of dean toward the dean. thorough but still stylisitic.

geez. <3.

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rubykate January 29 2005, 18:13:48 UTC
thankyou so much! <33333 its feedback like that that makes it all worth it!

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starrysummer January 29 2005, 22:57:07 UTC
Oh, that was just BEAUTIFULLY done. I just LOVE the parallel between him being her first and this image that haunts her and her going back and doing the same to him. Guh!

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rubykate January 30 2005, 12:33:53 UTC
thankyou very much! :D

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orpheus_samhain June 5 2007, 14:19:34 UTC
Never enough of Ginny/Tom. I love him sensual :)

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