Unspoken (Ginny/Cho, PG-13)

Aug 25, 2004 12:10

Title: Unspoken
Pairing: Ginny/Cho
Rating: PG-13
Category: Post-war, angst, sort of. Cho POV.
A/N: I wrote this last January sometime, I suppose, but wasn't happy with it at the time. Now I kind of like it, so I thought I'd share. It's an interesting style, but not something I can keep up.

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mistressmeow August 25 2004, 04:39:24 UTC
Love it, love it, love it. The second-person perspective works really well in this piece. I like the idea of Cho beinga professional Quidditch player. And angst! This is a very sweet story, one of my favorites you've written.

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rubykate August 25 2004, 07:31:13 UTC
Thankyou very much! :)

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lilith_morgana August 25 2004, 09:21:41 UTC
This was a very nice and sympathetic study of Cho. I love the pairing in general and especially with a healthy amount of angst. This POV works surprisingly well sometimes, in this story, for example.

Also - mind if I add you to the friends-list? I can never have too many femslashers there.

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rubykate August 25 2004, 09:29:52 UTC
Thankyou! :)

Of course! I'll friend you back :)

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certifieddork August 25 2004, 11:17:53 UTC
Wow, I really enjoyed this. Love Cho's perspective of everything, and lost-little-girl!Ginny. Really cool style - so delicate and sweet. ♥

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rubykate August 25 2004, 23:52:43 UTC
Thankyou very much! :)

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werechick August 25 2004, 19:42:28 UTC
sometimes I have to bite my lip to stop myself crying out “love me like Ginny does”,

Love that. Awesome work.

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rubykate August 25 2004, 23:55:25 UTC
Thankyou! :D

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sideofzen September 2 2004, 23:26:45 UTC
This was an excellent piece. I always enjoy this type of POV in a story and it worked very well with yours. Great job. :)

Do you mind if I friend? I could always use some more femslash on my flist. :)

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rubykate September 3 2004, 05:37:04 UTC
Thankyou!

Feel free to friend :) I'll friend you back!

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