Comments | rubygirl29: Breakaway Part 5 (Cam/Lorne) (NC-17)

rubygirl29

Breakaway Part 5 (Cam/Lorne) (NC-17)

Sep 26, 2009 20:35

The pretty is blinding! This is for Scout_Lover. Got your shades on?

Breakaway Part 5
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slash, cam/lorne, sg-1, stargate atlantis

Comments 11

scout_lover September 27 2009, 15:23:07 UTC

*tosses shades aside* Screw this, I wanta see!!!

Oh. my. God. That was beyond hot! So sweet and tender, and fierce ... Damn, you're still the best!

This just made me sigh: "Cam wasn’t sure, but he thought he’d been fucked senseless. Or loved into oblivion ..."

Oh, and this, THIS:

"it beats the alternative.”

“Which is?”

“C-4,” he deadpanned.

That's my boy! Light 'em all up, Evan!

rubygirl29 September 27 2009, 15:38:58 UTC

You are responsible for all this, you know! Thank you! I love writing Cam/Lorne. It's a very different dynamic than Sheppard/Dex. It works for me, though!

And I wrote the C-4 line just for you since you gave me the idea for it. I'm glad I was able to work it into a conversation! LOL. Yeah, Evan loves pyrotechnics ... of all kinds!

gaffsie September 27 2009, 18:22:47 UTC

I'm glad Lorne could talk some sense into Cam. I'm also glad that they finally decided to get naked together. :P

rubygirl29 September 27 2009, 23:33:17 UTC

I was beginning to wonder about those two! LOL. But getting naked definitely helped. They have big decisions ahead of them, so stay tuned.

jendavis September 28 2009, 00:51:48 UTC

I am becoming totally in love with Lorne, who Totally Knew What He Was Doing To Cam in the showers.

Very hot and sweet. *is happy*

rubygirl29 September 28 2009, 00:59:44 UTC

Of course he knew! But he was still a gentleman about it. :-) Lorne is pretty awesome, I think. And totally hot! I'm sitting here watching "The Last Man" because I have this insane urge to watch "Search and Rescue."

How are Eliot and Alec? ;-) Oh, yes, that's right. Eliot is in a very nasty place right now ... Gah!

jendavis September 29 2009, 07:18:38 UTC

..and by the looks of it, he may have to stay there for a while. i just found out i have to move oct. 1st. AAAAACK!

jendavis September 29 2009, 07:19:52 UTC

also: Lorne is not merely *pretty* awesome. he's *all sorts of mega-awesome!*

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kamadu September 30 2009, 01:47:24 UTC

woo! Thank you so much for mentioning this in your reply earlier. This is wonderful! Nice buildup to the relationship (and bonus look at Sheppard and how he got to McMurdo) and I can't wait to see where you go from here.

rubygirl29 September 30 2009, 02:34:14 UTC

You're welcome. There doesn't seem to be a lot of Cam/Lorne out there, but the two of them together just make me happy. :-) More Breakaway will be coming soon. Like, maybe Thursday.