Comments | rubygirl29: Fic: Fumbling Towards Ecstasy, Evan/Cam, NC-17

rubygirl29

Fic: Fumbling Towards Ecstasy, Evan/Cam, NC-17

Sep 04, 2011 23:52

Title: Fumbling Towards Ecstasy
Author: Rubygirl29
Genre: Slash
Pairing: Evan Lorne/Cam Mitchell
Rating: NC17
Disclaimer: Don't own them in this galaxy or any other.

Authors Note: The morning after Clueless in Colorado First time encounters aren't always the best. Apologies to Sarah McLaughlin for hijacking her title. This really has nothing to ( Read more... )

sga, cam/evan, slash, sg-1

Comments 6

somehowunbroken September 5 2011, 04:04:17 UTC

I love how normal everything is, in the end :)

rubygirl29 September 5 2011, 05:11:20 UTC

Thank you ... I should have proofed more carefully, but i think I fixed my tenses! Post in haste, re-write at leisure ... Gah!

clwilson2006 September 5 2011, 04:35:54 UTC

ohhhhhh. wonderfully hot and yet endearing too... will there be more of this?

rubygirl29 September 5 2011, 05:12:19 UTC

Mmmmaybe? Thank you for reading! We'll see what happens.

whytewytch4 September 5 2011, 12:32:05 UTC

Lovely! I know I've told you this before--I'm not usually a fan of present tense wrting, but I love how you write Cam and Evan together. Great attention to detail:

When Evan kisses him, he tastes the bitter musk of his own semen caught at the corner of Cam's mouth. Their mingled taste is bitter and sweet, nuanced and addictive. It surprises him.

At first, I was all pissed that we didn't get to see their first night, but you more than made up for it. I have to copy clwilson and ask, "Will there be more?" Please?

rubygirl29 September 5 2011, 12:45:00 UTC

More Cam/Evan, definitely. I might do the less than perfect first time, but Lorne doesn't seem to remember much! Maybe Cam's POV? We'll see ...

Meanwhile, thank you!