Comments | rubygirl29: Help the South Fic: The Cold Lonesome, PG-13, SGA

rubygirl29

Help the South Fic: The Cold Lonesome, PG-13, SGA

Jul 04, 2011 21:57

Title: The Cold Lonesome
Author: Rubygirl29
For: sharpes_hussy
Community: helpthesouth
Characters: John, Ronon, Lorne, McKay, Teyla
Genre: Genfic
Rating: PG13 for language
Words: 5,900.

Also on AO3Summary: The title kind of says it all ... John's jumper crashes in a fierce and unexpected storm, stranding him without communications. Injured and alone he has to face two ( Read more... )

sga, friendship, h/c, ronon, help the south, john

Comments 11

jendavis July 5 2011, 04:56:51 UTC

Aw, this was lovely! Lorne with the "don't leave a bloody trail in the snow" thing was kind of randomly awesome, and Ronon's "Come back safe so I can beat you up" was just so freakin' perfect. Yaaaaayaaaaay!

rubygirl29 July 5 2011, 10:55:18 UTC

Thank you! I really wish there had been more scenes between Sheppard, Ronon and Lorne in the series. They are such fun to write. I just wish I had more time to write them!

sherry57 July 5 2011, 05:33:28 UTC

So many things I love about this story.....the friendship, the whump, the crash, Sheppard being stoic and brave on his own agaisnt the creatures, Ronon's worry for him, Lorne determined to pilot even though he was injured as he had to find his friend, the rescue and comfort...it was absolutely excellent. An Atlantis adventure the way it should be...team and friendship the way it should be....perfect hon!!!
Definitely to bookmark to read again. Thanks!!

rubygirl29 July 5 2011, 10:57:54 UTC

Thank you! I'm happy that I was able to write a story that was auctioned for such a great price (Thank you, "Sharpes_Hussy"), and one that everybody can enjoy.

black_raven135 July 5 2011, 07:01:42 UTC

***applauds****
It is all and more........

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rubygirl29 July 5 2011, 10:59:28 UTC

Thank you for your generous donation, and a great prompt! I'm so happy it met your expectations and your wishes for John and Ronon h/c.

coolbreeze1 July 5 2011, 20:07:19 UTC

This is great! I love jumper crash stories, and the attack of those hybrid creatures was frightening. Love how Ronon came after John and made sure he got home safe. Great friendship and h/c story!

rubygirl29 July 5 2011, 23:32:42 UTC

Thank you! Yes, I love the h/c factor, too. :-)

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rubygirl29 July 7 2011, 00:26:22 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad it was for a good cause. I love writing John and Ronon.