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Fic: You Better Stop And Rebuild All Your Ruins - 12/12

Jul 14, 2010 01:03

Title: You Better Stop And Rebuild All Your Ruins - 12/12
Author: RubyChan05
Pairing: Holmes/Watson, Watson/Mary
Word Count: 2494
Rating: PG-13

( Sitting on the ground with a blanket thrown round his shoulders, Watson watched dazedly as the last of the fire was smothered by the fire-fighters )

watson/mary, holmes/watson, fanfic, sherlock holmes

Comments 18

rabidsamfan July 16 2010, 02:03:58 UTC

Marvelous! A truly epic read, and I loved your take on Mary!

rubychan05 August 23 2010, 12:26:55 UTC

Thanks! I just wanted to write a fic without demonising the poor gal.

ana_rpm July 21 2010, 23:58:30 UTC

Very good story. Loved it. :)

rubychan05 August 23 2010, 12:27:05 UTC

Thanks!

gretazreta July 22 2010, 07:46:44 UTC

Hi there, this is a really great story. I love the way that it unfolds, and I'm very fond of the conclusion. I also really, really, really like your characterisations: this was very important to the story because the difference between Watson and Joseph Bell had to be so precise, and you nailed that completely.
This is just so enjoyable, very well done.

rubychan05 August 23 2010, 12:28:11 UTC

Wow. Thank you so much!

I was a bit worried about the differences between Watson and Joseph to be honest, so I'm glad you thought it was fine.

Sorry I took so long to reply!

hitsukuro August 27 2010, 18:27:57 UTC

I loved this story very much. Thank you for posting. It's rare when I find the story that intrigues and captures my attention through out the story. i love ur writing style and hope to read more of urs someday soon. *satisfied sigh* it's writers like you that keep me going through the day. Thanks again!

rubychan05 August 27 2010, 21:58:07 UTC

Wow...thanks so much for such a lovely comment! That was...just wow. One of the nicest comments I've ever had!

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rubychan05 September 23 2010, 19:49:35 UTC

Thanks! Real Life has a habit of interfering, doesn't it? I nearly didn't get this done because of it!

Thanks for finding time to read it!