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ruby_caspar

fic: fool the world

Feb 22, 2010 02:10

FANDOM: MERLIN

Title: Fool the World (1/11)
Word Count: 2,848
Rating: PG
Spoilers: Only for Mulan
Disclaimer: I don't own Merlin or Mulan

Summary: AU - Mulan, Merlin style. When Mercia invades Camelot, conscription notices are sent out. To protect her ageing father Guinevere, a blacksmith's daughter from Ealdor, pretends to be a man and joins the army. ( Read more... )

fanfiction, rating: pg, au, pairing: arthur/gwen, ch: gwen, wip, merlin, ch: tom

Comments 23

mag2425 February 22 2010, 03:38:18 UTC

This is just soooooooooooooooooooo good!!! You are doing an amazing job with Mulan, Merlin style!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Is Gwen going to have to cut her hair??

ruby_caspar February 22 2010, 07:46:21 UTC

Thanks so much, I'm really glad you like it! ^^ And wait an see :P

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ruby_caspar February 22 2010, 07:47:20 UTC

:D:D Thanks! Next chapter should be a lot more fun, as we get to the army portion of the story. &hearts

beauty_within16 February 22 2010, 08:00:06 UTC

I really like this so far. Hopefully by the end of the story she won't be lonely. :)

ruby_caspar February 22 2010, 09:04:41 UTC

Thanks so much! :D

purely_distel February 22 2010, 15:35:11 UTC

OMG OMG OMG OMG *flails like mad* Oh this beginning is brilliant! Really. I love how you bring in little things from the movie. If I didn't know the movie so well, I would never notice them because they just fit and work! And your writing in this one is brilliant. The way you mix the illustrating part the, you know, "drawing a picture for the reader" with the facts part of it gives it a brilliant dynamic!

Thank you so much for this, really! I cannot WAIT FOR MORE!

ruby_caspar February 22 2010, 18:14:48 UTC

Thanks for the really technical comment, you don't get them very often! I'm happy you liked this chapter, thanks so much ^^

alittle2happy February 22 2010, 16:23:18 UTC

WHY HAS THIS NOT BEEN DONE BEFORE!!! ITS LIKE PERFECT!!!!

mulan is one of my favorites! and i love this so far!!

will we be able to expect updates on a regular basis?? :)

ruby_caspar February 22 2010, 18:16:17 UTC

Hopefully... the next chapter, at least, has a lot written of it already so should be up tomorrow. But I am the Queen of the WIP, so there's really no telling with me! This story has got me though, so hopefully I'll update regularly. :) Thanks so much, I'm really glad you like it! ^^