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ruby_caspar

fic: higher window

Jan 01, 2012 11:57

FANDOM: STARGATE: ATLANTIS

Title: Higher Window
Rating: PG
Word Count: 3,077
Characters/ pairings: John/Teyla

Summary: It's New Year's Eve on Atlantis, and John's tired of being a coward. Problem is it's hard to find the words.

I can't quite believe I've written this. It's just so.... fanfiction-y. Like seriously, something I would have written when I ( Read more... )

ch: john, oneshot, ch: teyla, pairing: john/teyla, fanfiction, rating: pg, stargate: atlantis

Comments 3

kariesue January 1 2012, 15:28:57 UTC

Well, I will take your cliche' and schmoop any day over a million other stories.
The set up was perfect and the inner thoughts were right on target regarding John.
And I do think Teyla would also be very nervous and anxious with moving forward with John also.
This was so real and romantic and you should be proud that you wrote something so beautiful and innocent. The world is missing a lot of that these days, so please no apologies for this story. I enjoyed it immensely. Thank you so much for sharing it.
karie

ruby_caspar January 1 2012, 23:00:24 UTC

Thank you for such a sweet comment! I'm really glad you liked it and that you thought it rang true at least, even if it was schmoopy. Happy new year :D

ssagey January 10 2012, 07:02:08 UTC

that was what should have happened ..and I will take this over other stories too...and this was a brief look at J/T and can see it all in my head...just beautiful
adn thanks so much..have to go check out the song which was perfect too...
hugs....
ps...looking forward to more Guardian...hint hint...
hugs