Comments | ruby_caspar: fic: quiet

ruby_caspar

fic: quiet

Sep 10, 2011 00:31

FANDOM: Primeval

Title: Quiet
Rating: PG
Word count: 1,219
Pairings: Established Becker/Jess

Summary: Becker and Jess watch some Disney. Becker doesn't know how to shut up.

WARNING: This story contains heavy spoilers for the film Tangled. If you haven't seen it - WHY?! It's amazing. Also, if you haven't seen it, the comments Becker's making will make ( Read more... )

pairing: becker/jess, oneshot, fanfiction, rating: pg, ch: jess, primeval, ch: becker

Comments 16

oaremylife September 9 2011, 23:53:03 UTC

OH THAT WAS AMAZING!!! Brilliant SO BRILLIANT! xD <3

ruby_caspar September 10 2011, 07:18:39 UTC

Hee hee thank you!

fallinwitstyle September 10 2011, 00:02:48 UTC

I am in complete heaven right now. Jess/Becker plus Disney. This was so good!!

ruby_caspar September 10 2011, 07:18:56 UTC

Yay, thanks so much!

yappichick September 10 2011, 03:29:03 UTC

RUBY!!!! I am totally might be coming off a little too forward, but I must say it...I love you! :D

I mean, not only have you taken my new fandom which makes my fangirl heart burn with the passion of a thousand suns, but you combine it with the other fandom that has taken over my life for the better part of the past year.

You totally and forever rock.

There are so many parts when I busted out laughing...I think Mike thought I was a little crazy, but oh, dude, the humor! The humor!

“Did she not think to put on shoes?”

“I don’t think she has any.”

“That would be like hell for you, wouldn’t it?”

“Quiet.”

I just about died at this exchange because it's true. Oh and let us not forget:

“Ha ha... Eugene.”

“Something funny, Hilary?”

“Quiet.”

“Ha!”

BAHAHAHAHA!!

Becker's commentary puts the boys at MST3K to shame. It's so freakin' sarcastic and dry. I love it.

“Should I be worried that your affection for me is directly proportionate to how much I remind you of Disney characters?”*snort* *giggle* and might I add a *guffaw*? ( ... )

ruby_caspar September 10 2011, 07:24:43 UTC

Love you too!!

Yaaaay so glad you like it! I have to admit, I didn't actually get the idea from your fandom loves. In mycrazy shippy brain, when I'm obsessed with a pairing (like Becker/Jess) I tend to think of them even when I'm watching other things... like Tangled, which I watch about 4 times a week. I've never written anything like this before, because I thought no one would get the craziness - but then I realised it would work for your birthday, so yay!

I'm just glad you got it, I was slightly worried it would make no sense to anyone but me... anyway, I hope you've had an AMAZING day!

yappichick September 10 2011, 20:11:49 UTC

i love the way your brain works. :D Oh, I totally got it probably because I've seen the movie a million and a half times.

The day was great! And there was even a dinosaur birthday cake to boot. (The pics are up at my journal, LOL)

alwaysadream963 September 10 2011, 07:48:17 UTC

So, So GOOD. Brilliant in fact. I can so clearly see this conversation and I happen to love Disney films as well. Tangled is great as is Zach levi...Almost up there with Becker!

ruby_caspar September 10 2011, 08:24:59 UTC

Haha totally agree! When I first thought of this story, I had Abby and Connor there too, and Jess and Connor having an exchange about how much they love Zach Levi... lol! Thanks, so glad you liked it :)

kattahj September 10 2011, 09:19:59 UTC

Oh, this is great! I quite liked Tangled, but Becker has a point, it requires much suspension of disbelief. And I hadn't even thought about that last point. :-D

ruby_caspar September 10 2011, 09:30:06 UTC

All Disney films can be picked apart... actually not just Disney, most films can be. I love Tangled, so I tend to let most of this stuff wash over me, though it was fun to write this and think about all those things! Glad you liked it :D