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ikbenniethier December 6 2010, 15:22:15 UTC
Love this update, your story is beautiful. Thanks for writing and sharing. I really admire your ability to make every character act as a person with a real personality. Also your gift to say things without writing them down. I can't wait for february.

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ruari555 December 7 2010, 01:23:56 UTC
Thank you very much for the kind words. Truly appreciated.

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mayireadtoday December 6 2010, 20:09:37 UTC
Awesome: “Well…” Butch tried valiantly to ignore the blush creeping up his neck. “You’re, like, way hotter in person,” he mumbled.

Wonderful to see this again.

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ruari555 December 7 2010, 01:24:38 UTC
Thank you! And thanks for sticking with it.

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kali_blue December 6 2010, 20:58:40 UTC
I was just thinking about this story and lo and behold you provide an update within hours. I love when that happens. Sweet slice to see Butch suited up to meet Miranda in her lair. hehehehe Once he meets her he too falls under her spell and wants to protect her, too.

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ruari555 December 7 2010, 01:26:49 UTC
Well, it's more likely he warned her more for Andy's sake than Miranda's (after all, he doesn't know Miranda), but yeah. He's a gentleman. And he agrees with the rest of us - she's hot. :)

Thanks for continuing to read and comment!

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beachbum3668 December 7 2010, 02:28:41 UTC
Ruari, I know I sound like a broken record but each new installment of this marvelous tale just keeps getting better. My only complaint is that we must wait between them. I cannot wait to see how this ends!

Well done, you!

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ruari555 December 8 2010, 02:10:30 UTC
And "thank you" remains on repeat, as well! Thanks, Beach!

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unfortunateggs December 9 2010, 20:57:16 UTC
I hope we see more of this soon. Intriguing. I found it while checking: find, entries on DWP comm.

I really enjoyed it so far.

Update soon.

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ruari555 December 11 2010, 02:47:09 UTC
I'm glad you found it. Thanks for reading and commenting. I really appreciate it!

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